Monday, September 18, 2017

Week 4A

In Class Critique:

Today in class, we had a critique on our final comics. Here is mine:



 Comments I received:

  • good job establishing the scene
  • consistent throughout
  • zoom closer to face on the 4th panel
  • make the Professor look more formal
  • The font is too bold
  • Professor is too close to the students
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